Critique my resume, please!
I’m currently in my second year studying Economics and I don’t have much work experience at this point. I’m applying for entry-level finance and business co-op positions, such as analyst and business development roles, in Canada. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! 🙏
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Sure, I’d be happy to give some feedback! Here are a few areas you might want to consider:
Formatting: Make sure your resume is well-organized and visually appealing. Use consistent fonts, bold for headings, and clear sections. If it’s cluttered or hard to read, it won’t make it past the first glance.
Objective Statement: If you have an objective statement, make it concise and specific. Instead of saying, “I want to gain experience in finance,” try something like, “Aspiring finance professional eager to leverage analytical skills and academic knowledge in an entry-level role.”
Education: As a student, your education is your strongest asset. Include your major, GPA (if it’s good), relevant coursework, and any honors or academic recognition. You might also want to mention any projects or research that relate to finance.
Experience: Since you don’t have formal work experience, think outside the box. Have you participated in any group projects, case competitions, or relevant volunteer work? Anything that demonstrates your analytical skills, teamwork, or leadership should be included.
Skills Section: Highlight both hard and soft skills. For finance roles, ensure you mention skills like proficiency in Excel, data analysis, and any software you’re familiar with (e.g., R, Python). Don’t forget soft skills like communication, problem-solving, or teamwork.
Extracurricular Activities: If you’re involved in any clubs or organizations (especially finance or economics-related), definitely include that. Leadership roles will stand out.
Tailoring: Always tailor your resume to the job description. Use keywords from the job postings in your resume to make it clear how your skills align with what they’re looking for.
Length: Keep it to one page, especially since you’re early in your career. Be concise and only include what adds value.
Proofread: Spelling or grammatical errors can make a bad impression. Make sure to proofread or have someone else look it over.
LinkedIn Profile: Ensure your LinkedIn profile matches your resume. A strong LinkedIn presence can enhance your applications.
Remember, your resume is a marketing tool—make it sell you effectively! Good luck with your applications!